Mr. Keith Pender


EvaluationShort StoryPoetryDramaEssayRepresenting & ViewingNovelsReview for Exams

 

 

Page Contents

           Outcomes

           Content & Assessment

           Evaluation

           Writing Assessment

           Role Play & Drama

           Journal Rubric         

           Newspaper Rubric

           Speech Assessment

           Reading Assessment

 

 

Outcomes

 

See: http://www.ed.gov.nl.ca/edu/sp/eng_langarts_inter.htm

 

  

Content and Assessment

 

Forms / Genres Checklist

Poetry

 

20 poems for intensive study / plus others for extended reading

Short Prose

 

15 short stories and 10 essays / plus other short stories, essays and media texts for extended reading.

 

Drama

 

Play done in an in-depth study. Ongoing emphasis through use of Role-play, Readers Theatre, and other forms of enactment.

 

Novels

 

 

Approximately one novel a month.  Two novels for in-depth study and five for extended reading. In line with Outcome 4.2, provide opportunity for students to: experience and respond to a variety of young adult literature from different provinces and countries and across a variety of genres (e.g., Fantasy, Science Fiction, Realistic, Historical).

 

Writing and other ways of Representing

Pieces of multi-paragraph ~ writing throughout the year. This writing would be in addition to that produced on: tests and examinations or the short (paragraph) responses of the type found on their response journals. Significant pieces of writing would follow a process approach to writing. In line with Outcome 5, one piece of writing or other representation must demonstrate evidence of research.

 

Media and Visual Tests

 

Within visual literacy, emphasis should be placed on me use of visuals as stimuli for writing and talking (e.g., preparing and presenting an illustrated talk)

 

1 Project related to media and/or visual literacy

 

Assessments

      4     Reading Assessments

      4     Writing Assessments

      4     Process Pieces

      4     Journal Writing Assessments - collected before each grading period

                      Transactional

                      Expressive

                      Poetic

                      Demand

      4     Research

      4     Oral Assessments (speeches, drama, presentations)

      4     Listening Assessments

      4     Representing & Viewing Assessments

      4     Response Tests (demand writing and unseen pieces for concept and content)

      4     Final Exam

 

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Evaluation

 

Term Work (Writing, Representing, Speaking, Listening, Reading, Viewing and Research            80%

 

  Writing and Representing                                                                                   30 %
   

Writing Process Pieces

Journals

Writing and Representing Assignments / Projects

     
  Speaking and Listening                                                                                      15 %
   

Speech

Role Play & Drama

Read Aloud in Class

Listening Evaluations

     
  Reading and Viewing                                                                                         25 %

 

 

→ Reading

→ Independent Novels

→ Reading Logs

→ Viewing

→ Tests

     
  Research                                                                                                          10 %

          

Final Examination                                                                                                                                    20%

 

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 Rubrics

WritingRole-PlayJournalsNewspaperSpeechesReading

 

Writing Assessment

 

Level 5

Writing at this level captures the reader with a unique, imaginative style that suits the genre. Not only is the text skillfully constructed, organized, and presented, it is either piercingly creative or insightful.  This student produces superior text much above the expected grade level.

 

Content Process Conventions Language Voice Presentation

Writes well-sequenced text which develops and integrates information and ideas to a successful conclusion

 

Often incorporates models from literature, research or poetry

Shows extensive awareness of the process of writing

 

Automatically sets own goals and reevaluates work

 

 

 

Excellent control over mechanics with careful attention to punctuation and communication

 

May manipulate conventions in an innovative fashion to suit a purpose

 

Excellent Spelling

Uses complex structures to express ideas with a unique style and flair

 

Develops well-organized paragraphs with well-composed and varied sentences,  vocabulary, exciting descriptive words or figurative language to suit the genre

 

Has an evident and identifiable firm awareness of voice, tone, and audience

 

 

 

 

 

Produces carefully organized final draft

 

Adjusts layout to suit genre

 

 

 

 

Level 4

Writing at this level is well-developed and is clearly and thoughtfully composed. There is a consistent attempt to adjust to genre. Writing is valued as a means of communication and conveys a clear message.  This student is able to focus the writing at the top end of the expected grade level.

 

Content Process Conventions Language Voice Presentation

Writes well-sequenced text which develops information and ideas to an acceptable conclusion

Shows a highly developed awareness of the process of writing

Very good control over mechanics with awareness and correct use of conventions of punctuation

 

Spells accurately at a high level in final draft

 

Uses complex structures to consistently express ideas clearly

 

Follows correct paragraphing conventions

 

Makes use of descriptive and figurative language to create and maintain mood

An awareness of voice, audience and tone most of the time

Transcribes and organizes final copy well

 

Often adjusts layout to suit genre

 

 

Level 3

Writing at this level shows a clear link between ideas.  There is a growing awareness of complex sentence structure and appropriate figurative language to communicate in writing with an audience. This writer sends a fairly clear message and produces text at the expected grade level.

 

Content Process Conventions Language Voice Presentation

Writes coherent text which develops information to a predictable conclusion

Reveals an awareness of the process of writing: prewriting, drafting, final draft

 

Makes an attempt at and shows awareness of revision, editing, and proofreading

 

Has good control over mechanics and awareness and correct use of most conventions and punctuation

 

Spells words accurately within an acceptable range of vocabulary

 

Uses simple structures with a fairly consistent command of verb tense to express ideas coherently

 

Makes use of simple language with some evidence of figurative language embedded in the text

Develops most paragraphs well

 

Shows emerging awareness of audience through style and vocabulary

 

Attempts to maintain tone throughout

Transcribes and presents final copy in a satisfactory manner

 

Is beginning to adjust layout to suit genre

 

 

Level 2

Writing at this level shows a sufficient control of syntax to convey a simple message.  Although the writing in general is able to meet the guidelines at the low end of the grade level, there will be occasional evidence of more complex sentence structure.  Practice is needed.

 

Content Process Conventions Language Voice Presentation

Beginning to show integration of information in a limited number of genres

 

Often makes a successful attempt at a conclusion

 

Shows awareness of some writing components: some drafting

 

Reveals emerging editing skills

 

Has an awareness of correct basic punctuation (i.e. at the ends of sentences) and capital letters

 

Uses transitional spellings often in final draft

 

Often makes use of simple sentence structure and verb tense is often inconsistent

 

May relay messages simply, often in shorter pieces of text

 

Expresses ideas at a concrete level, often sounds like talk written down

Does not show emerging voice with consistency

Sometimes, but rarely changes writing between first draft and final transcription

 

Good transcription capability 

 

Is not yet concerned with layout

 

 

Level 1

Writing at this level illustrates just enough control to send a sketchy message at a very literal or concrete level.  Disjointed sentences and fragments are constructed to convey the meaning.  Limited vocabulary, and minimal idea development.  A very limited use of text features is evident.  Written work is below the expected grade level.

 

Content Process Conventions Language Voice Presentation

Uses simple sentence construction and sentence fragments to send message

 

Often unsuccessful at making meaning clear

 

Is unaware and not ready to make use of all the elements of the writing process

 

May revise in a limited way (i.e. alter spelling, add words)

 

Reveals emerging skills

Has limited awareness that punctuation is used to transmit meaning

 

Uses much transitional spelling but there is growing accuracy in spelling some commonly used words

 

Is unaware of some syntactical constructions; uses commonly-used word patterns with greater success

 

Produces writing that sounds like talk on paper

 

Writes for self

 

Prefers the personal journal

 

Usually writes on version and transcribes it into a neater product

 

Usually wants to illustrate

 

 

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Role-Play / Acting

Belief

Was the Character convincing and believable, dress to character.

 

Voice

Were the quality, interpretation, and projection suitable for the character.

 

Body

Were gestures and movements clear, varied and appropriate.

 

Emotions

Was there proper balance between emotion and control? Were reactions true? Was mood sustained?

 

Relationships

Were the proper relationships maintained among characters?

 

Projection

Did the characters project orally and visually to the audience

 

 

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Journal Rubric

The journal is a very important part of the language arts program. Throughout the school year students will be involved in lessons where they will interact with many different stories, poems, essays, magazine articles, visual, plays and novels. Personal responses to this literature can be expressed in journals. Students will have the opportunity to make connections between what they read and their experiences, beliefs, and cultural practices. Journal writing will help student relate to the literature and provide them with the opportunity for reflection on what they have read. Students can experiment with ideas, pose questions, and explore feelings in their journals. Journal writing will help students understand the literary techniques involved in the pieces studied and enable them to see that literature is a living art form, shaped in part by what readers bring to it.

 

Important points about journals:

4 Journals must be written in a separate exercise book. Journal entries will usually be teacher guided.

4 Journal entries should be dated and include a title. Journal entries should be written in ink-

4 Students are encouraged to include additional entries besides those assigned by the teacher.

4 Students are encouraged to complete each assigned entry.

4 Journals will be graded on a rubric from 1-5.

4 Journals will be evaluated on the consistency of entries and growth of responses.

4 Entries should be approximately 10-15 sentences in length.

 

Teacher criteria for journal responses:

4 Are the thoughts and feelings recorded focused and insightful?

4 Is the content detailed showing thoughtfu1ness and care or is it a short "careless" kind of entry saying very little?

4 Is the entry on topic? Can the entry be easily followed or do errors in thinking and language use interfere with what is being said?

4 Did the student take any risks in presenting ideas or are the observations general everyday, conversational kinds or comments?

 

Five: Excellent

~ All entries are completed; additional entries are included.

~ Effort is commendable; entries are insightful, analytical, and full of rich, effective vocabulary .

~ Format is used consistently-

~ Entries go beyond the minimum length requirement.

~ Entries reflect insightful literature connections and deep personal connections.

 

Four: Good

~ All entries are completed but growth in the quantity and quality or the writing is evident

~ Some entries go beyond the minimum length requirement.

~ Details capture class discussions, making strong literature and personal connections.

~ Effort is good with strong growth throughout the term.

~ Insight is evident.

~ Format is consistently used.

 

Three: Satisfactory

~ All entries have been completed.

~ Entries fulfill the length requirement.

~ Details reflect class discussions and some personal reflection.

~ There is evidence of a consistent effort but there appears to be a lack of insight.

~ Format is consistently used.

 

Two: Needs Improvement

~ Not all entries are complete; 1 – 2 are missing.

~ Entries are inconsistent in length and detail.

~ Some improvement is noted but consistency and insight is lacking.

~ Effort throughout the term is inconsistent.

~ Format is inconsistently followed.

 

One: Poor

~ Entries are incomplete; more than 3 journals missing.

~ Entries are short and detail is scarce.

~ There is no improvement in content from the beginning to he end of the term.

~ The format is not properly followed; date and title are missing; entries are written in pencil.

~ Very little effort is demonstrated.

 

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Newspaper Rubric

    Newspaper Elements   / 25

    /3

Title / Captions

 

    /2

Price /Date / Page #’s

 

    /5

Layout

 

    /5

Organization

 

    /10

Presentation

 

 

 

 

    Newspaper Selections   / 15

    /1

Interviews

 

    /3

Stories/Articles

 

    /1

Advertising

 

    /10

Other

 

 

 

 

    Writing Conventions    / 60

    /35

Content

 

    /15

Conventions/Language

 

    /10

Word Choice/Voice

 

 

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Speaking Rubric / Oral Presentations

        Topic and Purpose of Speech         / 20

                4 Suitable to Speaker

                4 Relevant to Audience

                4 Clear and Concise

                4 Knowledge of Topic

                4 Interesting and Original

 

       Organization of Speech                   / 20

                4 Engaging Introduction

                4 Arrangement of Ideas

                4 Main Points Emphasized

                4 Main Points Supported

                4 Purpose Fulfilled

                4 Efficient Conclusion

                4 Use of Evidence

 

       Language and Style                          / 20

                4 Conversational

                4 Vivid

                4 Helpful Repetition

                4 Sentences Well Organized

                4 Good Use of Vocabulary

                4 Transitions Used / Coherence

  

       Delivery                                            / 40

                4 Posture and Poise

                4 Vocabulary Clarity

                4 Rate of Speech

                4 Volume (Adjusts as required)

                4 Voice Quality

                4 Eye Contact

                4 Voice Projection

                4 Articulation and Pronunciation

                4 Appropriate Body Movements

                4 Facial Expression

 

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Reading Assessment

 

 

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